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Chew.

Blow.

Pop.

Dawn did that again and again with her bubblegum. Being bored was one thing but being stuck in school really wasn’t Dawn’s cup of tea. She hated it. The teachers, the so-called “learning environment”, and especially the students. Let’s face it. To Dawn, school was such a drag. But she only went because her best friend, Roseanae, goes there. And she didn’t want to leave her alone. So she stayed. Dawn sighed as she propped her feet on the desk and crossed her arms, staring out the window.

“Ms. Valentine, it would be nice if you paid attention in class.”

Dawn scoffed. Mr. Allen was an ass. He always harassed her about paying attention. Like that was important.

“I already know that stuff.”

“Oh really? Would you like to show the class then?”

Dawn narrowed her eyes, “Fine. I will.”

She hated when he did that. Making her get up and show the class some stupid math problem. She stands up and walks to the front, frowning.

“Can you show the class how to do problem number 3? And show all the work.”

Some of the students snickered as Dawn grabbed the dry erase marker from Mr. Allen’s hand and looks at the board.

“Have fun figuring it out,” sneered Mr. Allen as he turned and went to sit down at his desk. But before he can sit down, he stopped at the sound of a nonchalant voice.

“Done.”


He twirled around and his mouth left agape as he stared at the board, covered with division, multiplication, some addition and subtraction and at the bottom right corner of the board, was the answer to number 3. Dawn tossed the marker back in Mr. Allen and went back to her desk.

“But... but that was only 30 seconds.”

“I know. Fastest time so far.”

The class stayed silent until someone smart enough yelled out, “Mr. Allen got schooled!” And the class erupted into laughter while Mr. Allen tried to calm them down. Dawn smirked as she propped her feet again on her desk. She loved making her teachers look like idiots. The truth was, Dawn was smart. Really smart. But her teachers couldn’t take her seriously as her attitude proved otherwise. The class got more rowdy as the bell rang. Dawn sighed as she collected her books and shoved them in her schoolbag. She noticed Roseanae waiting for her at the door and went to meet her, her school bag sling over her shoulder.

“How was class?” asked Roseanae as Dawn walked passed her and she followed.

“Boring as fuck,” mumbled Dawn as she turned to her and started to walk backward, “Mr. Allen was being a little bitch again.”

Roseanae chuckled, “You still need to pay attention though.”

“But it’s so easy. I already know all the shit he teaches, “ huffed Dawn as she popped her bubblegum and placed her arms behind her head.

“You should really stop walking backwards before you bump into something.”

Dawn turned to walk straight and looked at her, “Stop worrying, Roseanae, geez. Nobody would have the balls to walk into me--!”


And with that, Dawn didn’t even finish her sentence as something huge collided with her at full speed. The hit knocked her off her feet, sending her crashing to the ground. Dawn heard a grunt and a curse and realized that her eyes were close from the impact.

“What the hell did I hit?! Ow!”

Dawn snapped her eyes open and stared at the face of a red-haired hedgehog. He wore the school uniform and the school’s jersey sweater, meaning that he was on the football team. He rubbed his head as he opened his eyes and all Dawn stared at was the color grey. His eyes were like the season, winter. Too bad Dawn only thought that for two seconds before anger stepped in and decided that he needs to get his face punched in. And Dawn agreed.

“Watch where the fuck you’re going, you asshole!” growled Dawn as she shoved him off her and quickly stood up.

“Who the hell are you calling an asshole?! You’re the one standing in the hallway like a dumbass!”

He was obviously pissed. But Dawn didn’t care. She clenched her fists as she lunged at him, knocking him to the ground. Teens in the hallway surrounded them, screaming the words, “Fight! Fight!” The red hedgehog was surprised that Dawn attacked him and grabbed her wrists, struggling as she fought back.

“Wooh, wooh! Calm down! I don’t want to hurt you!”

Dawn struggles from his grip and grits her teeth.

“You fuckin’ asshole! You picked the wrong bitch to fuck with!” She snatched her hand back and slapped him across the face.


That tipped him off.

He growled and swung his fist at her, but stopped as Dawn caught it with her hand.

“Don’t fuck with you, “ she sneered as she raised her hand again to punch him in the face. But that didn’t happen. Because now, the English teacher, Ms. Crowmore, grabbed her hand.

“Fighting in the hallway, Ms. Dawn?”

Dawn narrowed her eyes at the red hedgehog before getting off him. “He started it.”

The hedgehog’s eyes widen as he quickly stood up. “My fault?! She attacked me!”

Ms. Crowmore shook her head as she pulled out a pink pad and pen, “Detention for fighting, Ms. Dawn and Mr. Hyper.”

Hyper groaned as Dawn scoffed. Detention was whatever. She always gets it. No big whoop. But it seemed like Hyper did not like that idea. Hell, it looked like he haven't been to it for a while, let alone his whole life.


“Detention is after school, in my class. Don’t show up and you’ll be sent to the principal’s office, “ said Ms. Crowmore as she handed Dawn and Hyper pink slips and headed back to her classroom, shooing wandering students to their classes, including Roseanae. Dawn stared at the pink slip before grabbing her bag off the ground and makes her way to the restroom to fix herself.

“Hey wait!” Hyper grabbed her hand and Dawn glared at him.

“What the hell do you want, you ass?” growled Dawn as she snatched her hand.

“Look all I want to say is that I’m sorry for crashing into you.”

“Oh yes. And look where it got us into," scoffed Dawn as she continued walking. Hyper grabbed his bag and walked next to her.

“I feel bad.”

“Well, you should be.”

“How about I take you out after detention? As an apology.”

Dawn looked at him and smirked, “Sure. You look pretty cute.”

Dawn smirked even more as Hyper’s face turned red.

“I-I should be saying that to you.”

Dawn stopped and stared at him. Cute? Since when did anyone call her cute? Badass, fire princess, bitch, the girl who can kick ass was the names she was called constantly.

“I’m not cute,” huffed Dawn as she shoved the pink slip in her bag. Hyper watches her and smiles.

“Well, you’re cute to me. Beautiful actually.”

Dawn felt her face turn red and looks away, “Whatever. Is that what you say to all the girls to get what you want?”

Hyper chuckles as he goes closer to her and tugs her hair gently.

“No. Only you.”

Dawn blushes slightly as she stops him from tugging her hair again.

“Fine. I’ll go with you,” Dawn smiled slyly as she reaches up and plants a kiss on his cheek and walks away. She looks back and sees Hyper smiling and his hand on the spot where she’d kissed him. Dawn chuckles and winks. For the first time in her life, she was actually looking forward to going to detention today.

Lol. Ya'll didn't know I write short stories, did ya? :iconiseewhatudidplz:
A oneshot of Hyper and Dawn. I did this while waiting for my brother at his Saturday school. :iconotlplz: So many mistakes, ugh. It sucks, I know TTvTT

But it feels good to write again. :iconohjoyplz:



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SlamJamSam Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconiseewhatudidplz: Why isn't school this awesome here. Why are girls can be boring where I live? Sure some are fun, but not like this...
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I know right? xD I would totally go to a school like that :meow:
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SlamJamSam Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I SHALL MAKE ONE.


Totally Epic High School.
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silvaze11223344 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i lurv it :)
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GreeneGrey Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
If there wil be more...:c
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
There shall~! xD Lots of people want it~!
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GreeneGrey Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Realy???
That's great!!!
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GreeneGrey Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
^///^
This is soo cuete
I wil read more of this c:
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:icondawnvalentine101:
DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you~! :aww:
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GreeneGrey Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
^^
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SofiaMistWolf Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
You just made my afternoon ;D great story!!!!(:
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awww really~? ;u; Yay~:dummy: Thank you so much hun~!
Gonna write part 2 of this since alot of people want it xD
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SofiaMistWolf Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
Yuppers <33 your welcome love and dont feel too pressured into it then creavtityy doesnt floooooowwww (lool c:) as good kay kay? Loll icantwaitforthenextoneDOITNOW!!!
oh -cough- who said that >.>....<.<;
xD
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laceymod Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nyohoho oh you, what a lovely story this is!:love: It's so cute and funny I just don't know what to say! LOVE LOVE LOVE!:heart:
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconohstopityouplz: ohoho gurl I was thinking about writing part two of this~ :iconheplz:
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dawnangel5001 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh and please write more =)
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I shall~ ;DD
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dawnangel5001 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool =)
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dawnangel5001 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i like it she is sooooooooooooooo cool with being smart then being able to fight. only if the teacher had not stepped that wold have been on heck of a fignt.
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Teacher was being a butt lol >__>
The only reason she butt in is because I can't write a fight scene to save my life :iconotlplz:
But I will keep writing to get better ;u;
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dawnangel5001 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dont worry you will get better at writing fighting scenes.
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you~ :D
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:icondawnangel5001:
dawnangel5001 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome =)
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MoniViolet Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How awesome!!! MOaR MOAR story!!! Your awesome!!! :iconmonkeythumbplz:
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much~! :D I shall write more~ <3333
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MoniViolet Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome~! :iconcicilalalaplz: Horray!!!
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Cllarky Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AWMY GLOOB!!!!
MOAR MOAR MOAR!!!!!....ROAR....
I'm gonna blow up if you don't write more!


...best thing I EVA read TT . TT
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I SHALL WRITE MOAR~!! :iconanimefaceplz:
so you won't blow up ;u;
Thank you so much~! ;O;
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Cllarky Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes YOU SAVED MY LIFE
No need to thank me ^^ I'm yust telling the truth
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SijiHawkeye Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
daw
this is awesome ~ <3
awww maaaan
i wanna write again <333
*snuggles* meeew ooh firey arent you dawn?

Ycremon: thats hawt~ <3
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh gurl :iconsweet-jesus-faceplz:
Go write some more, it's calling your name~ >DD
Oh yes gurl, Dawn is so feisty hurr hurr

Dawn: Whatever. >__>
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SijiHawkeye Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
tehee <3
hehehe
oh you lol teehee~ <3

Ycremon: |P

did you read the link of my side of the story to your short story?
i also realized, mine is WAY SHORTER than yours :U
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HyperBolt13 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
.........................MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondawnvalentine101:
DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
MWAHAHAHAHA I SHALL >DDD
Never knew you'll like it ;u;
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shadow-kissedvamp Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was awesome C: I love how you write your stories.
Are you going to do another one? xD
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much~ >U<
Probably xD I feel like writing more <3 Never knew people would like this one~
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shadow-kissedvamp Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem~ C:
Well, I hope to see another if you do xD
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Gurl, you make me want to write more now :iconmegustaplz:
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shadow-kissedvamp Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You betta :iconmegustabishieplz:
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Lol I shall~ :iconjuicefaceplz:
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BladetheEchidna1 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
DAMN, GURL! :iconspongebobrapefaceplz:

YOU SURE KNOW HOW TO WRITE STORIES!
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's a hobby~ :iconswagplz:
Used to write them all the time before drawing took over xD
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BladetheEchidna1 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You certainly know how to write. :iconpatrickplz:
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well I did have Creative Writing back in high school so that kinda helped <:
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BladetheEchidna1 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah.

I'M STILL IN JR. HIGH! :iconsawbplz:
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow really? :wow:
You write pretty good at your age. ;P
I'm in college now and I suck at writing xD You're better than me at this~
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BladetheEchidna1 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nah, you're better than me. XD

Everyone else thnks just like you. My study skills teacher, my english teacher, even those who don't like me, say I have good speech skills and good writing capabilities. Also, apparently, I'm also very grammatical.

Too bad I don't got :iconswagplz: like you.
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NlGHTLY Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
MOAR MOAR MOAR!
You have a thing for stories, my good friend. c;
And its outstanding. ; u ;
:heart::heart::heart:
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DawnValentine101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh gawd ;u; You have no idea how much that means to me right now :iconcryforeverplz:
I thought nobody would like it and junk~ ;u;
Thank you so much~! :iconaawplz:
I was thinking about writing more~
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NlGHTLY Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your story~ ; Q ;
You're so very welcome~ >u<
Omg you shouldddd...:iconasdfghplz:
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